LITTLE BOY SUMMER
Melinda Gohn is a co-founder of the Maui Live Poets Society. She is also “Ocean Tutu” (Grandma) to her grandson Montgomery. One summer, eleven years ago, she was able to steal him away all for her own self. It was a memorable time for both of them and this poem came out of the experience.
Montgomery’s all grown now, but his little-boy self lives on in this poem.
LITTLE BOY SUMMER
Cruising into my life this July
you look so much like your daddy my
heart sometimes catches and
my throat fills – as
I watch your boy strong body
stretch all its eleven years onto
surfboards and boogie boards and
skim boards –
now you’re so cool that if the surf’s
under two feet you look disappointed
and I know your step will be
sure now – and your shoulders strong
I listen to your treble voice eagerly
questioning why the rogue waves are so
big – and – if they will come into
Lahaina ?? – and watch your tangled brown hair
and agate-bright eyes wonder at
the endless ocean – as snorkeling, we stalk
brightly colored reef-fish and oddly friendly turtles. At night,
we mimic the geckos stalking the ceiling
above the small bed you use in my
den, occupied by poems and books and blankets
and the old TV – and we talk story as the
summer moon crosses again over this old cottage roof
and we live here by the sea – you and me
like a dream from long ago – preparing your small feet
for your life travel – feet – so like my mother’s-
growing longer with each footstep.
[July 21, 2005, Lahaina House], © Melinda Gohn, 2005
Picture credit: Footprints In the Sand by Chad Goddard via Flickr [CC BY-ND 2.0]
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8 thoughts on “LITTLE BOY SUMMER”
That was a great poem. I wish I could do that….take an experience and put it into poetic words. Unfortunately, that won’t happen with me. I think Melinda Gohn did a great job, and I loved the picture you added at the top of your post. Great vision…it went well with the poem. I am glad you shared 🙂
Hey Matt’s Mom…thanks for the visit and the comment. I’ll certainly share it with Melinda.
As for the poetry thing, I really do believe that anybody can do it. All you have to do is let go of pre-conceived notions about what “poetry” is and put together some words. If you like the result you can call it “done” and you can call it a “poem.” Give it a shot…I double-dare ya! Hee!
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What a lovely poem, thanks for sharing.
Melinda really captured the essence of that memory and has worded it beautifully. I have always wanted to get in to poetry being able to describe moments like that is truly a gist, as I can almost picture the scene it’s definitely worth sharing.
I hope her grandson also appreciates this as much
Hey Loulou…I will certainly share your comments with Melinda. Thanks for the visit. Please come again….
Oh,lovely poem…I almost fell asleep while reading. It sounds like a lullaby. Great work pal.
Hey Shob: Thanks for the visit and your comment. It made me smile. Please do come again….
LITTLE BOY SUMMER is a great poem for us all to learn by. She had the time to herself with her grandson. She watched and probably taught him how to use each of the boards for surfing. She had the pleasure of knowing that with each step toward mastering the waves he came closer to becoming a man in his own right.
She could tell that the lessons he learned would take him far in life because of not letting the unknown stop him. He grew in her presence and seems to know that the lessons he learned were meant to be used to look the unknown in the eye and tell it, ” I have met you and know you. You will not be allowed to make me small because I can overcome you” .
Jerry, I like your take on Melinda’s poem. I think that’s a great back-story for it.
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